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Post subject: Something for those who hurt Posted: Wed Jun 30, 2004 5:52 am |
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Joined: Wed Jun 30, 2004 4:44 am Posts: 2 Location: scotland
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This is something I wrote a long time ago... for a friend who was really badly hurt, and I hope it helps people to see that there will always be someone there for them, even if they feel alone. This is what love is for me, being able to give everything you've got, even when your love can't return it. One day the they'll return it tenfold.
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A little Emotional Aspirin... to cure Heartache.
Some people build up walls to stop them feeling the pain
Some people swear blind that they'll not feel love again
Some people seek out another to help them to find who they are
But you put your love behind bars
And I can't help you through this; I want to understand
All I can do is reach through,
All I will do is reach through and take your hand
And I'll hold it until the end of time
I will hold it til you can hold mine.
You caged your love where I can see it,
Though I can't reach to touch your heart
But it's there where I can feel it
And it's tearing me apart
Because I want to be there for you - to touch your soul
I want to be the one to make you whole again.
Some people spend nights all alone and let out all their hurt
Some people shut it all inside and never say a word
Some people thank their guardian angels and their lucky stars
But you put your love behind bars
And I can't help you through this; I want to understand
All I can do is reach through,
All I will do is reach through and take your hand
And I'll hold it until the end of time
I will hold it til you can hold mine.
You caged your love where I can see it,
Though I can't reach to touch your heart
But it's there where I can feel it
And it's tearing me apart
Because I want to be there for you - to touch your soul
I want to be the one to make you whole again.
Who knows, that day may never come
Who cares, because I don't
Who could let a special someone hurt this way, because I won't
You know I'm too strong to give up
I know, I sound a fool
But I could never bring myself to ever play it cool
Attractive as it sounds it never plays the way you planned
And chances are there'll be a day I'll just not understand
But I don't want to be the one to say I simply didn't try
I don't give up with goodbye
And I can see you through this, if you help me understand
All I can do is reach through,
If you let me I'll reach through and take your hand
And I'll hold it until you find the key
I will hold you 'til you can hold me.
_________________ Remember, if you're in love and not ABSOLUTELY crazy... you're not doing it right
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Post subject: Posted: Wed Dec 01, 2004 5:34 pm |
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Joined: Sat Oct 02, 2004 2:41 pm Posts: 7 Location: swansea
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hey nice poem, id like to write poetry, perhaps i will practice oneday, how long did it take to write this one? how long have you been writting poems for?
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cause_N_effect
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Post subject: just write Posted: Sat Jan 08, 2005 11:52 pm |
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Joined: Sat Jan 08, 2005 9:03 pm Posts: 21
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i liked this one too. reads like a song. i think poetry would be a good release. i don't have that talent, but i do write in a journal, which is another good release.
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Liz Location unknown | Posted at 3:35pm on Monday, November 10th, 2008 | Keeping straight for the nation? Really? I can't believe there's so many ignorant people that exist. I was married under prop 8 (0r prop HATE) with a partner the past 5 months, I've been with for 10 years. It's ignorant people like this that have caused me to lose that marriage legally.
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melanie school | Posted at 2:40pm on Friday, November 7th, 2008 | i think that you are disgusting!
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